Thursday 21 December 2017

My Mother Never Said I Should. (1994) by Charlotte Keatley. Methuen Student Edition

Key words
Generations, children, parents, grandparents, mothers, daughters, women, changing times, tough decisions, loss, strong women, tradition, being stuck, 20’s, 40’s, 50's, 60's, 70's, 80's, single parent, independence, teenagers, art, London, Oldham, Manchester, conflict, secrets, tension, subtext.

Play Length 1 hour, 45 mins

Time 1920s-1980s

Accents South London, Mancunian, Oldham

Place London, Manchester, Oldham, a non specific Wasteground

Set All very minimal, “the setting should be a magic place where things can happen” (Keatley, pg 3, 1994). Each setting should be suggested through light and simple objects and chairs. A wasteground or “other Place” , Cheadle Hulme the family home in Oldham, Raynes Park London, Cheadle Hulme Manchester, backyard Oldham, Office in Croydon, Twickenham hospital, Oldham backyard of house.

Specificity As the play takes in mini map setting it allows the possibility of being performed in various places. It ha s a flexibility about it hat could be interpreted and used in other English city’s, even other country’s. The accents and language are fairly specific to English culture so this must be considered if the play were to placed elsewhere.

Characters 4 females

Note: all the actors playing the characters need to be able to play flexible playing ages. In Doris’s case you would have to play her as a very young girl all the way up to her 87th year. The child parts of the play should be played by adults, with the possible exception of Rosie.

Ages below are suggestive

Doris 25-35
Margaret 25-35
Jackie 25-35
Rosie 15-25

Synopsis

Charlotte Keatley “wrote this play to explore the behaviour and communication of people” (Keatley, pg xxvii, 1994).

The play evolves around the generational lives of four females from the same family, Doris, Margaret, Jackie and Rosie. Scenes are set in different types of 20th century time periods from 1920-1987.

The play is a showing of changing times, family values, society and the pressures of family life/expectations. Each female in the play has moved on from their mothers values, which provides tension and debate. All perhaps are right, all perhaps are wrong, either way the females are subject to the culture and society they grow up in. 

The big secret of the play comes from Jackie's pregnancy of Rosie, whilst she is studying at university. Her mother, Margaret and Jackie agree that she will raise the child whilst she gets an education and a career. This turns in to a long standing tension between them, keeping the secret all the way up until Rosie is 16.

The secret divides the whole family and Rosie eventually decides to live with her Grandmother Doris, who get on very well, despite their obvious differences in generation and values.

There is something very moving about he play, the loss of time, pride, and love strike an accord with the reader and audience member. 

Monologues and duologues etc...

Page 81
Key Words Unwell, hospital, old age, senile, elderly
Length 1 min
Character(s) Margaret
Type Monologue
Synopsis Margaret is lying in a hospital bed under anaesthetic. The scene is surreal as Margaret blurs being under sedation with anaesthetic. However there is something quite moving about her words as if Margaret is trying to say something more meaningful.

Snippet

Margaret: My parents are called, My parents are called...Sticks and Stones...When I have babies, they will be called Sugar and Spice and all things nice...I will give them everything they want and they will love me (pause)...Mother?...Mummy...What happens when you die?

Page(s) 83-84
Key words Loss, regret, teenage pregnancy, lies, mother, daughter, secrets
Length 2 mins
Character(s) Jackie
Type Monologue
Synopsis Jackie reveals how hard it was, giving Rosie away at her birth and seeing Graham, Rosie’s biological father, years later with his family and kids

Snippet

Jackie: How dare you! You’re at the centre of everything I do!...She was the one who wanted to keep it a secret...I wanted you, Rosie.(Angry) For the first time in my life I took care of myself- refused joints, did exercise, went to the clinic. ‘It’s a girl’. After you’d gone I tried to lose that memory.

Page(s) 92
Key words Love, engagement, 1920s, changing times, courtship, naivety 
Length 2 mins
Character(s) Doris
Type Monologue 
Synopsis Doris is in a 1920s dress in her late teens/early twenties. She talks about her courtship to Jack and how she fell in love with him. The speech highlights the changing attitudes and generations within the play, it is fitting that Keatley would end the play with Doris as a twenty year old.

Snippet

Dorris: I felt so shy suddenly. I had to just stare and stare at the tablecloth while he was asking, blue and yellow squares, there was an ant struggling to carry a piece of cress across the corner. These are things you remember, all your life.  I suppose I didn’t think it would be like this and then we just ran and ran, talked, made plans. I felt somehow weedy, sort of silly having given in-to-love.


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Time (When is the play set)

Accents (What accents are apparent in the play)

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Characters (State how many characters there are. Then state how many males and how many females are in the play)

(Now state the characters and their age)

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Susan 17-40
Sir Leonard Darwin 40-50
Brock 25-30

Synopsis Write your own synopsis of the play, not to long and not too short. Do not copy any other synopsis, this must be unique and personal to you)


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Saturday 2 December 2017

A Day in the Death of Joe Egg (1967). By Peter Nichols. Faber and Faber

Key Words 
Cerebral Palsy, 1960's, physical health attitudes, breaking fourth wall, dark comedy,family, old fashion opinions generation gap, difficult mother, molly coddling, teacher, actors, strained relationships, Bristol, marriage, suffering, ignorance

Play Length 1 hour. 45 mins

Characters  6, 2 male, 4 female

Brian 33
Shiela 33
Joe 11
Grace 65
Freddie 40-45
Pam 40-45

Time 1960's

Accents West Country, RP

Place Bristol, England

Set A nineteen sixties living room, junk shop purchases

Specificity. The play could be set in other English settings. The genders are set and should not be changed. The time period is suited to the period as the content was shocking to the 60s/70s era. Cerebral Palsy had never been discussed so openly.

Synopsis 

‘A Day in the Death of Joe Egg’ is a dark comedy based around the lives of Brian, Sheila and their eleven year old daughter Joe. Brian and Sheila’s lives evolve around Joes extreme case of Cerebral Palsy and epilepsy.

As a way of diffusing the struggle of having a daughter with such crippling conditions, they often use controversial humour to make light of the challenging circumstances they find themselves in. Joe is often the butt of their jokes, which would have proved controversial to the 60s audiences. 

Sheila's "actor friend" Freddie and his snotty wife Pam are of the attitude that anyone with a physical disability should be in a home. Grace, Brian's molly coddling mother is very much in agreement.  

The play was ground breaking when it was introduced to the 60s theatre audience. Cerebral Palsy was not discussed so openly and seeing it on the stage whilst being a basis to humour was shocking. The play is ageless, a modern day audience can still relate to the humour and topics on show. Making the play hugely relevant to modern audiences, a revival is surely not far away.

Monologues and duologues

Page 9
Key words School, classroom, teacher, students, comedy, farts, discipline, detention, breaking the fourth wall. 
Length 2 mins
Character(s) Brian
Type Monologue
Synopsis  Brian speaks to the audience as if they were his class in detention, at the end of the school day. He leaves the students stood as he pops out to collect his coat from the staff room. Brian never returns leaving the students stood there.

Snippet

Brian: That’s enough! Another word and you’ll be here till five o’clock...You’re The losses...Right-hands on heads...stand on your seat...who was that? Whoever did that can open the window before we all get gassed...I’m going to get my coat from the staff room now. And you will be as quiet as mice-no fish-till I get back. 

Exits

Page 11-24
Key words Love, relationships, disability, sex, dynamics, daughter
Length 12 mins
Character(s) Brian and Sheila. Note: Joe is present during  the duologue, but does not speak.
Type Duologue
Synopsis This is an introduction to Brian and Sheilas life, how they cope with marriage and having Joe, their severely disabled child. 

Note: Joe is present during  he duologue but does not speak.

Snippet

Brian: Lets go to bed, come on
Sheila: Ow-don’t!
Brian: What?
Sheila: Your hands are cold you’ve just come in 
Brian: Lets go to bed
Sheila: At quarter to five?
Brian: I came home specially 
Sheila: The usual time 
Brian: Yeah, but I was going to keep them in
Sheila: ...Did you say you would?
Brian: Yes
Sheila:...Then why didn’t you?
Brian: I kept imagining our bed, our room, your legs thrashing about-

Page 24-26
Key words Father, daughter, comedy, controversial, sex deprived, frustrated, going through the motions, breaking the fourth wall, love.
Length 4 mins
Character(s) Brian
Type Monologue
Synopsis Brian talks of his admiration for his wife Shiela, for her patience and love of their daughter, Joe, highlighting his lack of connection with her.

Note: Much of Brian’s dialogue is with Joe in the room. This needs to be considered by the actor.

Snippet

Brian: ...you look pale , Joe. Is it those nasty fits? Never mind...we’ll have a bit of a chinwag round the oil heater...Joe and Daddy have a lovely cup of tea then Joe have a nice hot bath...what am I doing talking to you? Might as well be talking to the wall... Sheila embraces all
Living things...i get my hug somewhere in between the budgerigar and the stick-insect...

Page 26-27 
Key Words Jealousy, frustrations, relationships, marriage, husbands, points of view, breaking the fourth wall.
Length 2 mins
Character(s) Shiela
Type Monologue
Synopsis Shiela discusses her annoyance of Brian, his childish behaviour, his lack of trust and jealousy of her and Joe’s relationship.

Snippet

Shiela: One of these days I’ll hit him. He thinks because he throws a tantrum I’m going to stay home and comfort him...I blame his mother. She gave him the kind of suffocating love that makes him think the world revolves around him...it makes my blood boil...a grown man jealous of poor Joe.

Pages 44-45
Key Words Love, hope, anguish, faith, belief, frustration, false hope,  memories, breaking the fourth wall. Daughter, Disability, Cerebral Palsy, epilepsy.
Length 3 mins, 45 secs
Character(s) Shiela 
Type Monologue
Synopsis  Sheila is heartfelt and touching as she discusses her love and struggles with her daughter Joe. 

Snippet

Sheila: I join in the jokes to please him. If it helps him live with her, I can’t see the harm...I’d made a little tower...I got on with my dusting and when I looked again I saw she’d knocked it down...soon as Bri came home, I told him. I think he said something stupid like-you know-“That’s great, put her down for piano lessons.”

Page 62-63
Key Words Disability, ignorance, opinions, judgmental, class, Nazi’s, breaking the fourth wall.
Length 2 min, 30 secs
Character(s) Pam
Type Monologue
Synopsis Pam discusses her snooty and ignorant views on Joe and her disability.

Snippet

Pam: (Talking about Joe) ...once Freddie’s set eyes on a lame dog , you might as well talk to the moon...I can’t stand anything N.P.A. Non-Physically Attractive. Old women in bathing suits-and skin diseases-and cripples....if you knew...they had a cure in the Nazi laboratories , would you refuse to let them use it?...

Pages 65-66
Key Words Disability, ignorance, opinions, old age, loneliness, knitting, cinema, breaking the fourth wall.
Length 3 mins
Character(s) Grace
Type Monologue
Synopsis Grace, Brian's mother gives her opinion on her granddaughter disability and discusses her lonely life as an OAP

Snippet

Grace: ...there’s nothing much to fill in the afternoons and no one wants to sit about like a mutt...knitting passes the time and if you didn’t have some diversion , you’d sit around like a blooming nun...the poor mite dribbles...she can’t seem to regulate the flow. Her garments after a few hours on, they’re stiff with saliva...she should wear a plastic bib, it would be such a saving on wool...

Pages 78
Key Words Nagging, talking to yourself, old people, elderly, no filter, complaining, selfish, rude, breaking the fourth wall.
Length 2 mins 
Character(s) Grace
Type Monologue
Synopsis. Grace talks comedically about  being old
Snippet

Grace: ...Going out of the warm on a night like this is the best way if you want a o catch a cold...if I’ve got to stand about waiting for buses in this, I shall catch my death...Talking to myself. no but it’s an old car with no heater and dragged from all directions...

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Other plays by the author:  The Freeway, The National Health, Lingua Franca

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Written by Joshua Ashley-Smith

Wednesday 29 November 2017

The Exam by Andy Hamilton. (2005) Collins

Key Words 
Exams, family pressure, expectations, failure, stress, success, friendships, affairs, dating, teenagers, ghosts, teachers, students.
Play Length 1 hour


Time 00's

Accents General London 

Place Unspecified School and family houses, living room, kitchen etc..

Set Three desks and three chairs

Specificity 
As the play is simplistic in its set with minimal characters, it could be located anywhere. The is play gender specific as there are references to Mother/Father, Mr/Mrs. The play could be done anywhere in England, it does have some London references but generally it is specific to English culture.

Characters 13 (7 males/ 6 females)

Chas 15-16
Andrew 15-16
Bea 15-16
Mr A 45-55
Mrs A 45-55
Mr B 45-55
Mrs B 45-55
Mrs C 40-50
Dad 40-50
Ex 20-80
Miss Baxendale 30-45
Mr Biggs 30-45
Auntie Jean 40-50

Synopsis

Andy Hamilton’s comedy, 'The Exam’ is his only notable written play, having written more for screen, radio and literature.  The play exposes the pressures of being a teenager, exams and parents.

Andrew finds the expectations of his father, heavy, which prompts him to either throw up or freeze. Bea wants to rebel against her nickname ‘two brains’ as a result of her high intellect and Chas who sees the ghost of his dead father, would just be happy to get a C.

The interjections between the parents spotlit advice and the classroom, offers a refreshing balance, which results in some hilarious comedic exchanges. The parental perspectives are all different, but offer an interesting take on family structures and behaviour. 
  
An aside to the main characters sitting exams, is the ongoing affair between Miss Baxendale and Mr Biggs. Both argue and deliberate their “secret” in plain sight of the students, who gossip on every occasion Miss Baxendale leaves the classroom. 

Having completed his exam, Andrew takes the paper home to show his parents, presenting them with a picture of a well drawn, Harley Davidson. The picture is much to the surprise of his father as it is abundantly clear that he has failed his exam. Bea returns to her parents in a buoyant mood having made the eventual choice to successfully complete the exam and with the knowledge that she has a date with Chas on Saturday. To his surprise, Chas receives a compliment from his mother, which is in line with his fathers Ghosts advice, “give her a break, she’s doing the best she can”.

‘The Exam’ is watchable, comedic and like many other National Theatre, Connection plays, it lasts the test of time.

Monologues and duologues etc...

Pages (18-19)
Key Words Tourette's, friendship, hospital, comedy, teenagers
Length  3 mins
Character(s) Chas
Type Monologue
Synopsis Chas tells a funny story about how he and his mate used a made up Tourette's condition to get away with swearing at a man. When the man discovers that they are lying he chases them up a scaffolding tower and the boys escape in a dusty skip chute,  inevitably landing Chas in to Hospital.

Note: there is some interjecting dialogue in between Chas's Paragraphs. So the speech needs to merged slightly.

Snippet

Chas So last week Wednesday this chubby bloke walked past and I shouted 'You big fat git' and well he didn't take to it very well, got a bit upset. But then Spike weighs in and goes' Calm down, mate, no offence, he didn't mean it, he's got Tourette's...We ended up two storey's high with this man down below...Like a sodding monkey he was. Coming straight for us...I spotted one of those chutes that hang down off scaffolding...The bloke in casualty said that I'm lucky I didn't kill myself.

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Written by Joshua Ashley-Smith